You laughed the stars
Into the sky
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Blog: CNW
Twinkling Love Stars
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Twinkling along
Mountains at night
For everyone to see
Wishing and dreaming
A love that stays as
True and bright.
– cnw
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Blog: Giving it the Kiss Treatment
You laughed the stars
Into the sky…
birth….
1 boy 1 girl
5 years apart
childhood..
crazy whirlwind
learning who you are
Teen years…
you make me so proud
learning to be strong adults
Adulthood…
can we go back to birth and restart…
oh wait grandbabies!!!!
– givingitthekisstreatment
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Blog: RM Goldsmith Photography
You laughed the stars
Into the sky,
Your breath of joy
Answered my why.
Deep in your soul
Yes all is well,
You are at rest
Yes time will tell.
– RM Goldsmith Photography
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Blog: not faye’s
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Where I formed a
Constellation of your name-
Silently, a breath of prayer
To gods watching-
May my favorite sound
Remain echoing forever, amen
– f_3i
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Blog: Terre’s Blog – Women of All Seasons
You laughed the stars
Into the sky,
With a sublime
Twinkle of your eyes.
– terreblogger
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Blog: Rethinking Life
You laughed the stars
into the sky
and the moon
did somersaults of joy
no longer alone
– hitandrun1964
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Blog: The Unedited Version of Being Single & Christian
You laughed
the stars
Into the sky
Your mind’s adrift
You’ve pursued
The dreams you’ve carried
For most of your life
Head held high
Gaze affixed
One day
It will all be accomplished
– HarleyQ2
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Blog: Moira’s Dreams
You Laughed the Stars
You laughed the stars
Into the sky..
Breeze in your hair
Light in your eyes
As I stood there with you
My hand safe in yours..
Letting the moment sink in
As my heart skipped a beat
And wondered if only
My blessings knew my flaws.
– Moira Nair
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Blog: Word Shank
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
How lucky am I
To witness the constellation before me
Your eyes as the sea
The sun like your skin
And even warmer within
Heart of gold, nothing cold
Save the absence of you
A world in which that would not do
– amyshankle
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Blog: Through All Seasons
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
I stopped and pondered
Why oh why
How do I explain this sight
How can I know why
I felt the hush of heavens heart
Shhhh you cannot begin to try
We can talk and laugh together
Conversation lights up the night
You need not understand how or why
To be enraptured by the sight
– listeningwithlaurette
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Blog: other notes
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
and kissed the moon
to make it sigh
– hopefultraveller9435
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Blog: CATNIPMURPHY
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Stink faced
Shoulders bobbing
Pig snort inhalation
You have never been more you
And never more beautiful to me
– catnipmurphy
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Blog: A Realm of Ink
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
With mirth so pure
They’d never die
And forged the moon
With just your smile
Such beauty that
They can’t defile
Your breath is like
The thrum of wings
You are the source
Of beauteous things
The ocean’s dance
Your beating heart
Your death would tear
This world apart.
– Helen Cryestira Viorel
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Blog: Waxing Poet, Waxing Poetical
You laughed the stars
Into the sky;
I wept at dawn.
But then the sun…
– PH Yoga
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Blog: GedichtArt
To Julia
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
danced on a moonbeam
as if you fly,
bounced through the clouds
until they’re wry
and over your dreams
watching, am I.
– GedichtArt
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Blog: In the Margins
You laughed the stars
into the sky
and cried the rivers
into the earth
beauty falls from your tongue
like a snowflake to the ground
you are
the ember behind every inferno
the synapse of Gaia
rage on!
– penciledmargins
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Blog: My Poems
Smiling Moon
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
and the moon smiled down
Did you see it’s dimples
Hollowed out from miniature craters
On the crescent moon?
The sun will shine again
On the different moons
Enlarging the dimples
But not the smile
And the stars will align
Along the night sky
Awaiting the laughter
That drove them into the sky
And made the moon smile down
– Olutomi Akinsanya
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Blog: Woolgathering
You laughed the Stars
Into the sky
It rings there, little bells,
That twinkling sound,
Wishing you were around
Missing this,
Loving you
– delightedpessimist
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Blog: Pitching Pennies Poetry
You laughed the stars
into the sky,
How pure their twinkling
spark. When teardrops fill
your innocent eyes,
all the world goes dark.
– smzang
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Blog: Words by Soberflight
Laughter (prompt by Cubby)
You laughed the stars
Into the sky,
Then took them away
And made me cry.
You laughed the blue
Into the sea,
Then gave the very sun
To me.
You laughed the love
Into my heart,
And then I knew
We’d never part.
– soberflight
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Blog: Average but Savage
Moon’s Apprentice
You laughed the stars
Into the sky.
On a cloudless night,
They shone like diamonds.
As the moon cast arabesque patterns on
the lake below.
Mirroring your mirth, as the moon’s apprentice,
Calmly twinkling into the night.
– Average but Savage
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Blog: Disembogue
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
And cheered the moon
To rise ahigh
You howled the birds
Into the trees
And chuckled deep
To stir a breeze
– Wren
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Blog: Kids and Poetry Books by Haley Belinda
I laughed the stars
into the sky
My muscles hurt, I was so blessed,
It was when December was but nigh,
It made a change, as often I was stressed,
Laughter is the medicine for the soul,
I thanked you for showing me the way,
Alas, I did feel more whole.
Every single day in everyway.
How special I was chosen that plight.
The time I laughed the stars into the night.
– Haley Belinda
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Blog: Ring a Ring o’ Proses
You laughed the stars
into the sky
And cried as you watched
the clouds come by
Why did they block
the spectacular view?
Had they nothing
else to do?
You will the sky
to chase them now
Applaud as it turns
to take a bow
The moon takes on
a subtle glow
And the twinkling stars
complete the show
– Norah Vayle
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Blog: HoneyGwhiz
Laugh again for me
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
I saw them twinkle
Laugh again for me
Come little darling
Watch the night sky
As you sit by my side
I see the wonder
Laughter in your eyes
A twinkle here and there
I saw joy sparkle
Two hearts under the stars
You laughed the stars
Into the sky again
High above, beyond skies
Laugh again for me
– C.E. Pereira
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Blog: Welcome to Crystal’s Site
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Twinkling so bright
On that beautiful evening
You brought Daisy Mae to me.
She made it impossible to
Pass her up by using her lungs and
Meowing so loud so I could here her.
She acted so cute and
Made it so hard to pass her up.
The night those twinkling stars
Were so bright as if another
Member of family had been added.
The funny part was a new family
Member had been added.
So I say thank you to those
Stars who were laughed into the
Sky that night because they brought
Me a new addition to my family.
That new addition’s name is Daisy Mae.
I felt so blessed then when she came into
My life and I feel blessed now and each day
As I love her daily.
Her mother was just as beautiful as she is today.
They looked so much alike.
All I can say is
Thank You, Thank You, Thank You.
– Crystal
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Blogs: Alphabet City
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
And the gas right out of
Uranus
– Chagall
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Blog: Where Lilies Lie
Laughter (Prompted by Cubby)
You laughed the stars into the sky
Without a second thought
Now that hubris is left to lie
What horrors have you wrought
Every joke reveals its ignorance
As a clown betrays his sighs
The desperate have a happy parlance
As death encroaches nigh
– hawthornepassage
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Blog: Ckonfab
You laughed the stars into the sky
and weaved a beautiful story
Through your eyes
And I remained in complete awe
How the shine of stars
was a shade high
For you put them there
In such momentary trice
– Shantanu Baruah
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Blog: Ether
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
And then they exploded and died
And became black holes
Because your laughter
Made them that happy
– KT
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Blog: Grey’s Writing World
You laughed.
The stars came to be.
Bringing light.
Bringing joy.
No part of the sky was untouched.
An unfathomable glow.
Upon the darkest hour.
Lighting the world.
Reigniting the moon.
A sound so prue.
A sound so true.
Resonated from the deep.
The bellows of you.
– Amber Ausherman
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Blog: Antonia Sara Zenkevitch
Laughing the Stars
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
And, though clouds cover them
In this moment of despair
With those unquestioned whys
In your bright eyes,
I know your heaven’s there
In the bright spheres of life,
So, while we wait
For the atmosphere to clear
Let me just state
For your weary heart to hear;
You laughed the stars
Into the sky.
– Antonia Sara Zenkevitch
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Blog: The House Apart
Poetry: Laughter
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Your glowing smile
Taught me to fly
Looking back now
I wonder why
You looked like you
Wanted to cry
– The House Apart
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Blog: SNAP CRACKLE AND POP!
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Your giggles stimulated
the wee birds
chirping…
– hugr5
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Blog: The Secret Lantern
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
And cried the seas
Into the deep.
With honest hands
You crafted life,
By all intent
You planned to keep.
– Garret
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Blog: YONNIEWORDPRESSCOM
✨ SHINE BRIGHT✨✨
YOU LAUGHED THE STARS ✨
INTO THE SKY
THEY EXIST BECAUSE OF YOU
EACH SHINES SO BRIGHT, AGAINST THE DARK NIGHT SKY
NOT A CLOUD IS PRESENT, IT’S THE CLEAREST OF NIGHTS
GAZING UP, THE STARS ✨ FILLED THE SKY FROM THOUSANDS MILES AROUND
WE TAKE PLEASURE IN THE BEAUTY OF YOUR UNIQUE CREATIVITY
STARS SO BRIGHT, CAN BE SEEN TWINKLING IN THE NIGHT
GOD’S GRAND LAUGHTER, EACH TWINKLING STAR CAN’T COMPARE TO THE LOVE HE HAS FOR YOU AND I
– YONNIE 💜 INHISCARE 🙏
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Blog: How Hope Was Lost
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
And exhaled the soul
Out of my body
– howhopewaslost
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Blog: NobbinBlog
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
You craft the scars
I hide inside
You hung the moon
To hide the dark
You are the womb
From which life sparked
I made the seas
I am earthquakes
My tears never cease
From endless heartbreaks
Your heart is oxygen
Your smile is sunshine
I need your glow again
But you won’t be mine
– Nobbinmaug
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Blog: the daydreamer next door
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
It’s a memory
That puts tears in my eye.
We talked all day
And danced all night.
The perfect date,
The city lights.
And then you got in your car
Never to be seen again.
Oh, even though you’re so far
My heart will always be your den
– may
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Blog: The Muted Muse
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Burning holes
The darkness
Follows
wherever I go
But so does your light.
– mishasm
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Blog: If You Haven’t Got a Sonnet
Night Falls With Joy
You laughed the stars
into the sky
Out there past Mars
as the crow flies
Then hummed a tune
and smiled the moon
as night took flight
– muttado1sb
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Blog: obbverse
You laughed the stars
into the sky,
Funny, now after ten jars
In the gutter I lie.
– obbverse
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Blog: bellabirth
You laughed the stars
To the sky with great gusto
A delight for all
– Catherine the Birth Cartographer
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Blog: Dawning Creations
You laughed the stars
into the sky.
Spinning like a manic pinwheel,
arms outstretched.
I must admit,
it was from that moment on that I truly appreciated you.
You.
Wonderful you, finally accepting your excellence as midnight crashed upon us.
Tucked away in the back garden,
I needed to be free with you.
We laughed the stars into the sky,
shedding our disguises, loving who we really were.
I hope this won’t be our last time.
– Brittny Lee
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Blog: Karima Hoisan
You laughed the stars
Into the sky,
Your smile, a new moon,
With eyes crinkling bright.
You made moonbeams
to bathe lovers in blue light,
And I too fell in love…
How could I not fall in love
With your magic?
– Karima Hoisan
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Blog: Abandoned Amenities
“You laughed the stars into the sky”
Only now, this minute, do I realize
This, and understand joyful truth:
You are God who loves, cherishes, knows me
Your misfit, orphaned child of scarred mystery
You are the Happy God*, my Heavenly Father
Hurray! Hurrah!
And even if I see no stars, clouds concealing
I will listen for, hear, the twinkling of Your laughter
The merriment You feel when You look upon me
With tender care, covenant grace and peace.
©Ennle Madresan
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Blog: Snapshot Couplets
You laughed the stars
into the sky
and cried the Milky Way
then smiled the sun
into the blue
as the break of day.
– Mario A. Pita
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What a nice idea 👍😊
I’m glad you like it! 🙂
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Where I formed a
Constellation of your name-
Silently, a breath of prayer
To gods watching-
May my favorite sound
Remain echoing forever, amen
This is heavenly. I especially love the third and fourth lines. Beautiful response! 🙂
I love the idea of your favourite sound, (or a name) echoing forever.
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Twinkling along
Mountains at night
For everyone to see
Wishing and dreaming
A love that stays as
True and bright.
That is just lovely! What a wonderful response. 🙂
thank you so much, this was the first one i did and didn’t realize the title of poem was ‘laughter’ haha hopefully the poem still works 🙂
Of course! It works beautifully. 🙂
You laughed the stars
Into the sky…
birth….
1boy 1 girl
5years apart
childhood..
crazy wirlwind
learning who you are
Teen years…
you make me so proud
learning to be strong adults
Adulthood…
can we go back to birth and restart…
oh wait grandbabies!!!!
You gave birth to a whole family of stars! What a brilliant family tree. 🙂
thank you. they are truly my stars
I’m sure they think you are one of the brightest stars in the tree. 🙂
Thank you 💜
I love this beautiful tribute to your children – it says so much with so few words.
Thank you
You laughed the stars
Into the sky,
Your breath of joy
Answered my why.
Deep in your soul
Yes all is well,
You are at rest
Yes time will tell.
Aww this is really sweet. For “never…much of a poet,” you write some nice poems! 🙂
Thanks, but I’ll stick to pictures and writing about them.
And doing my prompts. 😉
You laughed the stars
Into the sky,
With a sublime
Twinkle of your eyes.
Says so much in so few words. Love it. 🙂
Thank you Cubby. 😊
And thank you for such a great response to the challenge! 🙂
You laughed the stars
into the sky
and the moon
did somersaults of joy
no longer alone
Ah that is so whimsically charming. Love the joyfulness in the somersaults. 🙂
I like these challenges:
You laughed
the stars
Into the sky
Your mind’s adrift
You’ve pursued
The dreams you’ve carried
For most of your life
Head held high
Gaze affixed
One day
It will all be accomplished
I love the power and strength in your words. Inspiring! I’m glad you enjoy the challenges. 🙂
Thank you
You laughed the stars
Into the sky..
Breeze in your hair
Light in your eyes
As I stood there with you
My hand safe in yours..
Letting the moment sink in
As my heart skipped a beat
And wondered if only
My blessings knew my flaws..
Moira Nair
Moira’s Dreams
This is so romantic and lovely. Thank you for your beautiful response. 🙂
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
How lucky am I
To witness the constellation before me
Your eyes as the sea
The sun like your skin
And even warmer within
Heart of gold, nothing cold
Save the absence of you
A world in which that would not do
I love the metaphors you use. This is wonderfully dreamy. 🙂
Wow thank you! I love incorporating nature and such into writing
And I love reading about nature in writing. 😊🌸
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
I stopped and pondered
Why oh why
How do I explain this sight
How can I know why
I felt the hush of heavens heart
Shhhh you cannot begin to try
We can talk and laugh together
Conversation lights up the night
You need not understand how or why
To be enraptured by the sight
❤️❤️
I love doing these prompts because of the beautiful poems that writers like you create from them. This was a delightful response. 🙂
It was a fun and awesome idea, thanks for the invite. 😊
I’m so glad you enjoyed it! I know I really enjoyed reading your words. 🙂
and kissed the moon
to make it sigh
This tickles me delighted. Love the whimsy and rhyme. 🙂
thanks so much! 🙂
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Stink faced
Shoulders bobbing
Pig snort inhalation
You have never been more you
And never more beautiful to me
Lol you started it off with some wacky humor and then ended it so beautifully. What a contrast. Love it. 🙂
Truth is beauty, beauty truth – that is all
Ye know on earth and all ye need to know
That’s Keats that is.
So it is, so it is. Love the quote. 🙂
brilliant, lol!
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
With mirth so pure
They’d never die
And forged the moon
With just your smile
Such beauty that
They can’t defile
Your breath is like
The thrum of wings
You are the source
Of beauteous things
The ocean’s dance
Your beating heart
Your death would tear
This world apart.
This is gorgeous! The flow, the rhymes, the imagery… absolutely love it. 🙂
Thank you, you’re too kind!
You laughed the stars
Into the sky;
I wept at dawn.
But then the sun…
I’m not sure if this is finished?
It is. 🙂
Ah okay! How enigmatic… 🙂
For Julia
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
danced on a moonbeam
as if you fly,
bounced through the clouds
until they’re wry
and over your dreams
watching, am I.
A wonderful promt, thank you Cubby for the inspiration. GedichtArt
This was really lovely. Thank you for such a beautiful response. 🙂
Thanks, I am glad, you liked it. 🙂
You laughed the stars
into the sky
and cried the rivers
into the earth
beauty falls from your tongue
like a snowflake to the ground
you are
the ember behind every inferno
the synapse of Gaia
rage on!
Love how you combined biology and nature in this enchantingly picturesque poem. 🙂
Wow! This resonates beauty and power with the imagery you use, I love it.
Smiling Moon
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
and the moon smiled down
Did you see it’s dimples
Hollowed out from miniature craters
On the crescent moon?
The sun will shine again…
https://wp.me/p8p2cI-bq
Love the celestial beings in your poem. An excellent response! 🙂
You laughed the Stars
Into the sky
It rings there, little bells,
That twinkling sound,
Wishing you were around
Missing this,
Loving you.
Aww this is so sweet with a twinkle of sadness. A lovely response. 🙂
Thank you! I love this idea! I wanna do something like this when I have a bunch of followers like you!
I’m glad you enjoyed it! I look forward to your future prompts! 🙂
You laughed the stars
into the sky,
How pure their twinkling
spark. When teardrops fill
your innocent eyes,
all the world goes dark.
This is so beautifully romantic. Love the rhymes you used as well. 🙂
You laughed the stars
Into the sky,
Then took them away
And made me cry.
You laughed the blue
Into the sea,
Then gave the very sun
To me.
You laughed the love
Into my heart,
And then I knew
We’d never part.
Thank you for responding with your beautiful thoughts and rhymes. 🙂
Loved the idea and here’s my version: https://averageandsavage.com/2019/02/07/moons-apprentice/
You laughed the stars
Into the sky.
On a cloudless night,
They shone like diamonds.
As the moon cast arabesque patterns on
the lake below.
Mirroring your mirth, as the moon’s apprentice,
Calmly twinkling into the night.
Absolutely loved this captivating response. 🙂
Thank you for the link! 🙂
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
And cheered the moon
To rise ahigh
You howled the birds
Into the trees
And chuckled deep
To stir a breeze
This reads like a musical song a bird would sing. Love the flow and rhymes. 🙂
Thanking you 🙂
I laughed the stars
into the sky
My muscles hurt, I was so blessed,
It was when December was but nigh,
It made a change, as often I was stressed,
Laughter is the medine for the soul,
I thanked you for showing me the way,
Alas, I did feel more whole.
Every single day in everyway.
How special I was chosen that plight.
The time I laughed the stars into the night.
Love the message in this poem. I really believe that “laughter is the medicine for the soul.” This was a wonderful response to the challenge. 🙂
You laughed the stars
into the sky
And cried as you watched
the clouds come by
Why did they block
the spectacular view?
Had they nothing
else to do?
You will the sky
to chase them now
Applaud as it turns
to take a bow
The moon takes on
a subtle glow
And the twinkling stars
complete the show
You remind us that the sky can show us a spectacular show on its heavenly screen. Love your response. 🙂
Thank you for your kind words.
I love the whole picture….I can almost see the moon-lit clouds scudding away.
That’s nice of you to say. I loved your entry too.
A wonderful prompt. I hope you like the outcome….
Laugh for me again
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
I saw them twinkle
Laugh again for me
Come little darling
Watch the night sky
As you sit by my side
I see the wonder
Laughter in your eyes
A twinkle here and there
I saw joy sparkle
Two hearts under the stars
You laughed the stars
Into the sky again
High above, beyond skies
Laugh again for me
By C.E. Pereira
(8-2-2019)
I loved the outcome! Melted my heart. 🙂
Laughter is one of the key ingredients in love.😘
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Twinkling so bright
On that beautiful evening
You brought Daisy Mae to me.
She made it impossible to
Pass her up by using her lungs and
Meowing so loud so I could here her.
She acted so cute and
Made it so hard to pass her up.
The night those twinkling stars
Were so bright as if another
Member of family had been added.
The funny part was a new family
Member had been added.
So I say thank you to those
Stars who were laughed into the
Sky that night because they brought
Me a new addition to my family.
That new addition’s name is Daisy Mae.
I felt so blessed then when she came into
My life and I feel blessed now and each day
As I love her daily.
Her mother was just as beautiful as she is today.
They looked so much alike.
All I can say is
Thank You, Thank You, Thank You.
Sniff, this wasn’t a sad poem but it almost made me cry. I am so happy Daisy Mae became a member of your family. This was beautifully written. 😊💜🐾
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
And the gas right out of
Uranus
Apologies – it was the first thing that came to mind, and I ran with it. I am willing/ready to suffer the literary consequences. —CC
No apologies necessary! It’s bad for Uranus to always be holding it in. 😉
Jupiter, Saturn, and Neptune, are also gas giants.
But not as funny as Uranus. 🙂
You laughed the stars into the sky
Without a second thought
Now that hubris is left to lie
What horrors have you wrought
Every joke reveals its ignorance
As a clown betrays his sighs
The desperate have a happy parlance
As death encroaches nigh
Love the intellectual/philosophical approach you took with this poem. 🙂
You laughed the stars Into the sky
and weaved a beautiful story
Through your eyes
And I remained in complete awe
How the shine of stars
was a shade high
For you put them there
In such momentary trice
Your words always hint at a mystery and a story that has yet to be told. Beautiful. 🙂
Thank you my friend. It is all your creation. I just added few words. 🌸😊
Now, now, you can’t do that. It was 95% your creation. 🙂
😊🌸 you gave the cue
And then they exploded and died
And became black holes
Because your laughter
Made them that happy
You laughed.
The stars came to be.
Bringing light.
Bringing joy.
No part of the sky was untouched.
An unfathomable glow.
Upon the darkest hour.
Lighting the world.
Reigniting the moon.
A sound so prue.
A sound so true.
Resonated from the deep.
The bellows of you.
Thanks. I changed it slightly, sorry. This is pretty neat.:)
No need to apologize! As long as you enjoyed doing the prompt, that’s the most important thing. And you did such a beautiful job with it, so how could anyone complain? 😉
Thank you!
Your giggles stimulated
the wee birds
chirping…
What a perfect response from a feline writer! 😸🌸🐾
hey, right, you’re using a cat’s face for your photo as well! 🙂
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
And cried the seas
Into the deep.
With honest hands
You crafted life,
By all intent
You planned to keep.
Nice prompt, Cubby! Thank you and here’s a short one 🙂
I can’t think of more perfect lines than the ones you added. Really excellent job! 🙂
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
And exhaled the soul
Out of my body
This is a very intriguing response! 🙂
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
It’s a memory
That puts tears in my eye.
We talked all day
And danced all night.
The perfect date,
The city lights.
And then you got in your car
Never to be seen again.
Oh, even though you’re so far
My heart will always be your den.
That is really beautiful and sad. Thank you for your wonderful entry. 🙂
You laughed the stars
Into the sky
Burning holes
The darkness
Follows
wherever I go
But so does your light.
Sorry it took me so long to respond. This was really lovely! 🙂
Night Falls With Joy
You laughed the stars
into the sky
Out there past Mars
as the crow flies
Then hummed a tune
and smiled the moon
as night took flight
Thank you for finding my site, as it led me to yours. This was a fun challenge and fit well in the form I’ve chosen to use.
I’m glad you had fun with the challenge! I love your response. Made me smile. 😊
You laughed the stars
into the sky,
Funny, now after ten jars
In the gutter I lie. (This is a nice idea- UnboltMe does a similar kind of thing. And thanks for peeking in…)
What a unique response! Love it. 🙂
You laughed the stars in
To the sky with great gusto
A delight for all
Lovely response! I put the title of your blog as bellabirth. Please let me know if you would like this changed. 🙂
thank you, bellabirth is fine. ❤
You laughed the stars
into the sky.
Spinning like a manic pinwheel,
arms outstretched.
I must admit,
it was from that moment on that I truly appreciated you.
You.
Wonderful you, finally accepting your excellence as midnight crashed upon us.
Tucked away in the back garden,
I needed to be free with you.
We laughed the stars into the sky,
shedding our disguises, loving who we really were.
I hope this won’t be our last time.
What a beautiful response. Love it. 🙂
Thank you so much ! I enjoyed this one a lot !
You laughed the stars
Into the sky,
Your smile, a new moon,
With eyes crinkling bright.
You made moonbeams
to bathe lovers in blue light,
And I too fell in love…
How could I not fall in love
With your magic.?
Love the imagery! Beautiful response. 🙂
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Was a lovely poetic place to take off from…
Here’s my entry, thanks for the prompt!
https://abandonedamenities.com/2019/02/27/happy-god/
My pleasure! 🙂
🙂 🙂
What a lovely prompt!
You laughed the stars
into the sky
and cried the Milky Way
then smiled the sun
into the blue
as the break of day.
And what a lovely response! Loved the rhyme at the end. 🙂