I’ll find you where happiness grows,
An answer that dwells in my heart
For it’s only the heart that knows
Where its home is for sweet repose.
I’ll find you where happiness grows
Unencumbered by ashen woes,
Where sickness will no longer part;
I’ll find you where happiness grows,
An answer that dwells in my heart.
2019 Β© Sonya Annita Song
Want to learn how to write a triolet?Β Click hereΒ for the challenge and give it a try! π
This is great, Cubby!! π For me, it’ll be anew experience. I’ll try it, though not now. π π
You can try it whenever you have time. I will be looking forward to it when you do! Please leave a link or comment on the challenge page for me to add it to the challenge post…if you want. π
Thank you, Cubby!! π
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Charming! ππ
You are too kind. π
Your write these forms like they are easy ( sigh).
listen
heart filled with love
rhythm of the beat
singing like angels
melody of happiness
And you write troikus as if it comes as naturally as breathing. π
Thanks kiddo:)
Beautiful to read, and beautiful sentiment π
I’m glad you liked the sentiment. π
I enjoy the unique style as well as the flow and rythm. You have mastered it.
Haha hardly mastered, but I appreciate the hyperbolic sentiment. π
You are humble, but that is a strength.
I prefer to think of myself as a realist. π
This is beautiful. The format, words and your thoughts – golden
You look at the world with eyes full of beauty, like Midas with gold, except your eyes turn everything beautiful. π
That is really sweet of you to say that. I state what I feel. And your work always amazes me
Again, the feeling is mutual. π
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Beautiful!! You own a lovely style of writing π wonderful choice of wordsβ€οΈ
That’s very kind of you. Thank you so much! π
I don’t have a blog about poetry so I won’t post it up there, but I wanted to share mine with you anyway. It’s been years since I last tried to write something and you challenge was really nice to get met started! Thanks π
Into the silence I stare
Trying so hard not to cry
I pretend never to care
Into the silence I stare
Life just doesnβt seem fair
But βyou should always try’
Into the silence I stare
Trying so hard not to cry
This is a wonderful triolet! I am so happy you tried this challenge as you seem to write this form effortlessly. Very nice!
I have added your triolet to the challenge post with a link to your lovely blog. And you don’t have to have a poetry blog to write beautiful poetry. π
Thank you so much! Nice that you like my triolet π
Loved it. You should write more of them. I think you have a knack for this form. π
This is great
Iβll have to try it
I really hope you do! And I would love to read it when you have one ready. π
Its beautiful.
That’s very kind of you. Thank you so much. π
Very nice, and there’s a new old challege with a new old style for me to learn.
And you are so good at learning them. π
I usually learn quickly.
I believe that! π