Where I’ll Find You (Triolet)

I’ll find you where happiness grows,
An answer that dwells in my heart
For it’s only the heart that knows
Where its home is for sweet repose.
I’ll find you where happiness grows
Unencumbered by ashen woes,
Where sickness will no longer part;
I’ll find you where happiness grows,
An answer that dwells in my heart.

2019 Β© Sonya Annita Song

Want to learn how to write a triolet?Β  Click hereΒ for the challenge and give it a try! πŸ™‚

38 thoughts on “Where I’ll Find You (Triolet)

  1. This is great, Cubby!! πŸ™‚ For me, it’ll be anew experience. I’ll try it, though not now. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    1. You can try it whenever you have time. I will be looking forward to it when you do! Please leave a link or comment on the challenge page for me to add it to the challenge post…if you want. πŸ™‚

  2. Your write these forms like they are easy ( sigh).
    listen
    heart filled with love
    rhythm of the beat
    singing like angels
    melody of happiness

    1. And you write troikus as if it comes as naturally as breathing. πŸ™‚

  3. Beautiful to read, and beautiful sentiment πŸ’•

    1. I’m glad you liked the sentiment. πŸ™‚

  4. I enjoy the unique style as well as the flow and rythm. You have mastered it.

    1. Haha hardly mastered, but I appreciate the hyperbolic sentiment. πŸ˜€

      1. You are humble, but that is a strength.

        1. I prefer to think of myself as a realist. πŸ˜‰

  5. This is beautiful. The format, words and your thoughts – golden

    1. You look at the world with eyes full of beauty, like Midas with gold, except your eyes turn everything beautiful. πŸ™‚

      1. That is really sweet of you to say that. I state what I feel. And your work always amazes me

        1. Again, the feeling is mutual. πŸ™‚

  6. Beautiful!! You own a lovely style of writing 😊 wonderful choice of words❀️

    1. That’s very kind of you. Thank you so much! πŸ™‚

  7. I don’t have a blog about poetry so I won’t post it up there, but I wanted to share mine with you anyway. It’s been years since I last tried to write something and you challenge was really nice to get met started! Thanks πŸ™‚

    1. Into the silence I stare
      Trying so hard not to cry
      I pretend never to care
      Into the silence I stare
      Life just doesn’t seem fair
      But β€˜you should always try’
      Into the silence I stare
      Trying so hard not to cry

      1. This is a wonderful triolet! I am so happy you tried this challenge as you seem to write this form effortlessly. Very nice!

    2. I have added your triolet to the challenge post with a link to your lovely blog. And you don’t have to have a poetry blog to write beautiful poetry. πŸ™‚

      1. Thank you so much! Nice that you like my triolet πŸ™‚

        1. Loved it. You should write more of them. I think you have a knack for this form. πŸ™‚

  8. This is great
    I’ll have to try it

    1. I really hope you do! And I would love to read it when you have one ready. πŸ™‚

    1. That’s very kind of you. Thank you so much. πŸ™‚

  9. Very nice, and there’s a new old challege with a new old style for me to learn.

    1. And you are so good at learning them. πŸ™‚

      1. I usually learn quickly.

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