I loved you once upon a time,
I think that’s how the story goes,
But then you broke my heart in two
And so I bloodied up your nose.
You looked so shocked to see the blood,
I think you thought that I would plead,
But no, this way at least I’d know
My heart was not alone to bleed.
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Reowr 
Is red still the color of love?
It seems to be the color of choice.
That is so clever
Hehe thanks. 🙂
LOL! Oh you are too much! So funny!
Ah, so glad at least one person laughed. I think I’ve scared away all the male readers though. 😀
I loved it and shared it on facebook…too funny not to! Sorry guys!
Very amusing Cubby, well done x
Glad you found it amusing! 🙂
…..I get the drift cubby 😉
Aww, I couldn’t hurt a fly…mainly cuz they’re too fast for me to catch…but really, I am actually a very gentle person with ever so slight passive-aggressive tendencies.
hahahahahah if u insist 😉
Remind me never to get in an argument with you.
Now, now, I don’t really bloody people’s noses. I may, however, bite and scratch a little, but that kind of thing is just part of your daily routine.
It is when you own a kitten as mental as the one I own.
Cute! Can’t really relate, though…most of my relationships died a timely death. The one time my heart was “broken” the boy turned out to be a real jerk (tried to get back with me the day before his wedding to the girl he had made up with when he left me.) and I was better off! Besides….I’m a pacifist.
So am I. This was pure fiction, as most of my writing is. Just a twist on the usual heartbreak poems. 🙂
Way to go give the sucker his due! 🙂
Merely poetic justice. 😉
How purrrfect is THAT! Red is the color of whatever is going on at the time and I love the poem.
Why is aquamarine never the “going on” color? Who decides these things?
I kind of feel bad for laughing…
Wait, Im not the only one?! Ok, so I dont feel completely bad=D Great post!
Hehe, no you’re not the only one. It wasn’t meant to be taken seriously. 🙂
Ah Cubby kitty shouldn’t go about bloodying noses…there’s better ways to use your paws…and maybe knees! But I’m not sure that’d work in a poem…
Ah yes, you are right of course. I should have wet my paws with water, played around in my litter box, and then walked all over his face. I don’t know which version people would have found more off-putting.
This certainly would have been very funny! And people do have peculiar tastes…they usually prefer to seen weeping damsels for some reason, sighing perhaps, a tear running down their cheek in romantic rhyme…better a walk on the wild side in my opinion!
So poetic and direct. Love it! Reminds me of a story I read about Adele punching a boyfriend in the face because he cheated. Afterwards, she wrote her song “Chasing Pavements.” … Lol, that could be totally false, but I read it somewhere.
Huh, I will now have to look up the lyrics for that song…and then listen to the song. I am really out of the loop when it comes to music. Is Rollin in the Deep still in the charts?
I know it’s still played quite a bit. Don’t know if it’s “in the charts” or not.
Well, now I don’t feel too bad. 😉
oh my god, I laughed and smiled and grinned all at the same time. If you get the image.
It started off so meek, but the blood added a punch to it. 😉
Lol, it sure did. 😛 Glad it made you make funny faces. 😀
I am glad too! 😉
Nasty little poem, likable.
Purely fictional, I assure you. Not exactly an eye for an eye though considering an average nosebleed lasts 5 to 20 minutes whereas a heartbreak can last for years.
Not cute for me but its relatable. The line that says not only I should bleed was perfect. Why should u only suffer…lol. nice little poem…meaningful.
I find it interesting to get such different reactions from people, such as “nice little poem” and “nasty little poem” right after each other. I’m glad you found the poem meaningful. 🙂
Thats the beauty of these lines…everyone relates it differently. ..:) you are lucky you’ve got such a huge fan following that people stop to read, relate and comment :-).
Yes, my readers are generous with their time and comments, for which I am grateful and humbled.
Revenge is bitter sweet. 😉
Haha yes, it does seem that way. 🙂
:::Applause:: Bravo! 🙂
Lol the females responded so much better than the males did to this one. 🙂
Ace!
of Base! Wrong decade?
*giggles*
“All that she wants”
so bad it was good
Great! I am really enjoying your poetry a lot!
Thanks too for visiting Move the Chair-I appreciate you looking around-
Hehe glad you liked this one too! I like both cats and dogs. 🙂