Lilsawarian Dectet
Rhyme scheme: aabbccdddda
Hot stuff?
That’s fluff
And trite,
Despite,
You wink
And think
Your word
Is heard
Though slurred,
Absurd,
Enough.
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Reowr 
Very clever
🙂
Now THAT is a rebuff if I’ve ever read one…you did a fantasti job there!
I’m still waiting to try it out 😉
Hope you don’t have to too soon.
Diddlydum
Addendum
HA!
Ahhh, that’s a GOOD one!! I could have used that in my younger days…
Hehe glad you liked it. 🙂
I could never think and wink at the same time….
Not a very useful skill in my opinion.
Very cool!
Thank you! 🙂
Clever:)
Purrr 🙂
Haha, love it! You have such a way of communicating so much with so little detail. Powerful. That’s an interesting rhyme scheme; I might have to try to experiment with that.
Anything with a rhyming scheme is fair game for rhymers! 🙂
Love that rhyming scheme, wasnt sure the longing on DDDD then back to A would work, but with your line length and talent for saying so much with so little, it works perfectly. Loved it! 😀
Hehe glad you liked it. The different rhyming schemes are fun to play with. I lack enthusiasm when it comes to writing free verse styles.
ive been mulling over Haiku’s today…never written one or really read them..but i fancy a challenge….be interesting to try and put some darkness in the few syllables allowed. 😀 Also, shh, i have written a couple of xmas poems!!! Its for a potential anthology for childrens charity so i dont feel too bad..but they are pretty dark haha
I think you could fit darkness in anywhere you can find some white space. 😉
Ooo, dark Xmas poems for children…I hope you post them as I would love to read them! 🙂
i will post them nearer xmas, there are some short ones, limericks and a couple of longer ones….its for a book hopefully, to be published for xmas, its for all people to read, but for kids who dont always make it to xmas….sad but a good cause… remind me to post them or i will forget lol thats if i remember to save them! haha
little taster, Limerick layout and pacing…
So christmas is here again
bet it wont snow, just rain
it makes me feel sad
this year is quite bad
Gonna go jump under a train
You weren’t kidding when you said dark! I should have known you wouldn’t just be referring to some coal stuffed into some stockings…
haha, some are much much worse, although i have this little light hearted one
At xmas im told
if you’re not too old
you can sit upon santas knee
but if your eighteen
and look rather lean
you’re welcome to sit upon me
😀
ROFL I don’t even know what to say to this one lmao.
haha, it was a rare attempt at humour! 😀
Nice brush off!
😀
Clever and fun. Awesomes.
Hehe glad you liked it! 🙂