Galactic Mother

Our galaxy’s a mother
Who nurses all her young.
Her milk will always flow
For every hungry tongue
That suckles greedily,
The planets that adorn
The bosom of her space,
Like kittens newly born.

30 thoughts on “Galactic Mother

  1. hitandrun1964's avatar

    Did Cubby write this wonderful poem? “Like kittens newly born,” is there a more wonderful thing than that?

    1. Cubby's avatar

      How did you know?! Cubby has a soft spot when it comes to kittens. Purrr.

  2. Oloriel's avatar

    Gorgeous and gentle, loved it!

    1. Cubby's avatar

      Aw, you are too kind. πŸ™‚

  3. Lovely Lucidity's avatar

    Wow, you’re an absolutely amazing writer. You take such serious and philosophical topics and write cute and enlightening poems about them. Your poems have a shel Silverstein (my favorite poet) feel to them. Keep it up, cubby, you’ll go far.

    1. Cubby's avatar

      Thank you so very much for your comment. I am overwhelmed by your kindness. Your words mean so much to me as they help motivate and keep me excited about writing things that I hope others will enjoy. πŸ™‚

  4. bee's avatar

    Such an enlightening piece of poetry

    1. Cubby's avatar

      The kittens most likely played a role. πŸ™‚

  5. Georgia's avatar

    That is a lovely poem Cubby, absoultely adored the image of planet kitties! You’ve got your head on straight that’s for sure, as Sekhmet would say. πŸ˜‰

    1. Cubby's avatar

      Haha well, it beats having my head on backwards I suppose! πŸ˜›

  6. soberflight's avatar

    Boy, this sure started a whole set of mental images in motion…..a little scarey!

    1. Cubby's avatar

      Hehe hopefully not scary mental images. πŸ™‚

  7. Zelda Veild's avatar

    Very Nice Poem.

  8. Chelseamcatt's avatar

    Wow! Your use of analogy (or maybe it’s metaphor?? I’m not sure – the way you connect the galaxy and mothering) here, is simply wonderful! I love this piece.

    1. Cubby's avatar

      It’s safe to say that it’s a metaphor as it directly compares our galaxy to being a mother, but I have no idea what the difference is between an analogy and an extended metaphor…hurts my head to think about. πŸ˜›

      1. Chelseamcatt's avatar

        It hurts my head too, lol – glad I’m not alone πŸ˜€

  9. kwicksand's avatar

    Soft kitty warm kitty little ball of fur…..

    1. Cubby's avatar

      Yes, little kitty fur balls πŸ™‚

      1. kwicksand's avatar

        Dr Sheldon cooper

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