If a Cloud

If a cloud was my pillow,
How well I would sleep!
No more tossing and turning
And counting of sheep.
I would dream of the stars and
The oceans below,
How they mirror the skies and
The secrets they stow.
I would watch a pale maestro
Conduct the tide’s ebb
As the notes of the waves form
A musical web
And dance to the sweet,
Haunting, pure melody
With the wind as my partner,
How splendid we’d be…

There’d be no more qualms,
Only marvels allowed,
In the dreams of a pillow
With essence of cloud.  Copyright 2013 © Sonya Annita Song

17 thoughts on “If a Cloud

  1. kwicksand's avatar

    I want a cloud bed now! 🙂

    1. Cubby's avatar

      Baby steps…first pillow, then bed. 🙂

  2. pilbra's avatar

    Oh such a dream cloud

    1. Cubby's avatar

      Real pillows don’t like me, so I had to make one up. 🙂

  3. arjun varma alluri's avatar

    Secrets they Stow…. lovely 🙂

  4. Brian Hughes's avatar

    Actually you’re more likely to end up with a very wet head and a stiff neck.

    1. Cubby's avatar

      Well the cloud would be encased in an indestructible, wet proof, and head-contoured casing…duh. 😛

  5. fibee5's avatar

    Lovely poem but it’s making me sleepy :p

    1. Cubby's avatar

      Well, if there’s anything my writing is good for, it’s putting people to sleep. 😀 Hope you have lovely dreams. 🙂

      1. fibee5's avatar

        your words are to lovely to send people to sleep

        1. Cubby's avatar

          They are only as lovely as the ones who interpret them that way. 🙂

  6. Cynthia Morgan's avatar

    Poozes…..they are so precious 🙂 Merrrroooooo 🙂

  7. Holistic Wayfarer's avatar

    I like it:

    As the notes of the waves form
    A musical web
    And dance to the sweet,
    Haunting, pure melody
    With the wind as my partner,
    How splendid we’d be…

    (It’s if a cloud were my pillow. Subjunctive mood. Not reality.) Please delete this part of comment. And thank you for the ongoing support.

    1. Cubby's avatar

      In British English, both “was” and “were” are recognized for hypothetical use, with “were” being seen as more formal. “If I was” is regularly used by highly educated British English speakers. As grammar changes over time, I believe this will also become the trend in North America.

      1. Holistic Wayfarer's avatar

        As a former linguistic major, I’m glad to know that. =) Thanks.

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